Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/ User:Cap'n Ben/Led Zeppelin
Jump to navigation
Jump to search
User:Cap'n_Ben/Led_Zeppelin[edit source]
There's a rewrite tag on Led Zeppelin, but I thought I ought to check that this is an improvement before I move it over. --Cap'n Sir Ben GUN WotM VFH VFP 08:52, 8 June 2007 (UTC)
| Humour: | 6 | It's very good, don't get me wrong. But I don't know, I found some of it to be trying too hard. |
| Concept: | 7 | Odd idea, but not exactly bad. |
| Prose and formatting: | 7 | Of course it's choppy, and sometimes a little distracting. |
| Images: | 6 | Very much lacking in this department. I wish I could suggest some more, but I can't. |
| Miscellaneous: | 6 | I think if you added some more content to the middle sections, and actually cut down from the introduction, then you'd have more going for it. |
| Final Score: | 32 | I didn't hate it, but not my favorite of your works. Still in progress, but get that crap off of the mainspace and work on this there! |
| Reviewer: | Sir Ljlego, GUN VFH FIYC WotM SG WHotM PWotM AotM EGAEDM ANotM + (Talk) 02:38, 9 June 2007 (UTC) | |
Thanks! I know it still has a lot of work needed; I just wanted a second opinion before I killed the existing article. --Cap'n Sir Ben GUN WotM VFH VFP 07:30, 9 June 2007 (UTC)