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Why?:Save the mooses?[edit source]
Does it suck? If so, how much? Should I be shot, and if so, with what sort of gun? – Sir Skullthumper, MD (criticize • writings • critchat) 00:24 Aug 29, 2007
I'll have a go at this one, although by rights it should be STM. Still...
Humour: | 8 | Good stuff. Like the stuff about moose spirituality and the menu method in particular |
Concept: | 9 | Inspired - where did you get that idea? ;-) |
Prose and formatting: | 8 | Fine enough, although for me the lack of consistency with the pluralisation grates a tad (but I am the type that happens to). If you've started with Mooses, I think it would feel better to stick with Mooses as your plural throughout. |
Images: | 9 | There are some, they fit, they work, they're fine. If I'm being picky, the steam powered moose doesn't quite look right (I know a steam powered moose isn't right, but the pic doesn't look, oh, you know...), but it's still fine. |
Miscellaneous: | 10 | A møøse once bit my sister |
Final Score: | 44 | Yeah, like it. Mind you, you should still be shot. With a gonne. But in a fleshy part where it will heal quickly. I've been watching too many violent films lately. |
Reviewer: | --Sir Under User (Hi, How Are You?) VFH KUN 10:34, 14 September 2007 (UTC) |
- I'll break the laws of grammar and go for Mooses throughout! Oh, and I'll have to see about that steam-powered moose. I get what you mean. It's supposed to be stupid-looking, which it is, but you're right, something's... off. Shame this thing can't be on VFH, everyone'll see it as a STM ego type thing. Bonus points for referencing Monty Python and Terry Pratchett in the same pee review. – Sir Skullthumper, MD (criticize • writings • critchat) 19:08 Sep 14, 2007