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User:SysRq/Threads Of Our Existence: Excerpts From the Secret Writing Journal Of F. Scott Fitzgerald[edit source]
Alright, so here it is, finally finished. I'm actually REALLY iffy about this piece, and I'd like to take this as far as I can. I'd like to ask that only a member of PEEING review this article, since I don't trust the rest of you to do a good job and this is an important one. I've been working on this since about 11 today, and it's just now 2:30. Thanks in advance! ~Minitrue Sir SysRq! Talk! Sex! =/ GUN • WotM • RotM • AotM • VFH • SK • PEEING • HP • BFF @ 18:30 Mar 20
| Humour: | 8 | I think what you've done with the text trnasformation of the poem on to daily events is really good, similalry I like the way you make the mundane mix with Fitzgrelads poetic sense, it the kind of hmour I get, it's not too laugh out loud, more of smerking humour - Classic |
| Concept: | 10 | The conept is much more elborate than what most peple do, I think this i somehtng I might copy/steal |
| Prose and formatting: | 5 | Don't take this the wrong way, but the large bold text just does not look right, there could be more links. |
| Images: | 8 | Alright, There could be some Mhaille doctored ones with Fitzgerald. |
| Miscellaneous: | 10 | I like the idea, and although I don't recall reading anyof our previous stuff, I think this is really cool. |
| Final Score: | 41 | I have not done one of these before, I hope what I have said will be helpful:) |
| Reviewer: | --Sycamore (Talk) 17:29, 22 March 2008 (UTC) | |
- Thanks so much for the review! Unfortunately, seeing as how this is not a very in-depth review at all, I'm going to have to resubmit this to get a second opinion. Don't take this the wrong way, but I did specifically ask for a member of PEEING to review this and as far as I know, you are not one. But thanks again for your interest in my article! ~Minitrue Sir SysRq! Talk! Sex! =/ GUN • WotM • RotM • AotM • VFH • SK • PEEING • HP • BFF @ 02:07 Mar 26