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User:Magic man/UnNews:FCC puts new censorship law in place (slightly censored)[edit source]
In depth please. Thanks. --
02:30, July 9, 2011 (UTC)
- I'm reviewing this. -- The Zombiebaron 05:49, July 9, 2011 (UTC)
| Humour: | 7.5 | You were able to fit several laugh out loud moments into such a short article. |
| Concept: | 10 | Great use of blacked out text! It gave the article a very "censored" feel, as you point out in the first word of the piece: "censorship". The fact that you left such a small amount of text visable to the reader was very well done satire. |
| Prose and formatting: | 10 | What little text I could see all seemed to be spelled correctly and properly punctuated. |
| Images: | 0 | There were no images. Maybe you should include a picture of a smiling child with the caption blacked out? I like images. |
| Miscellaneous: | 8 | I loved the length of this article. Very succinct and to the point. |
| Final Score: | 35.5 | I really liked this articles. |
| Reviewer: | -- The Zombiebaron 06:01, July 9, 2011 (UTC) | |