Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/UnNews:UnSports NFL update: 2023 belated mid-season edition
Jump to navigation
Jump to search
UnNews:UnSports NFL update: 2023 belated mid-season edition[edit source]
Admittedly an ambitious news/sports article. Might have overworked it tbh, or folks here just don't care about sportsball... either way, how did I do? Anything I did well or could have done better?
Orange Tang 16:44, 27 December 2023 (UTC)
| Humour: | 8 | its funny, a liiiiiittle scattered about, but once it gets in "stride" it kinda goes crazy. The interviews are all highlights (yes, i know they are also 90% of the body), but each one had its own element of humor to it which was nice and helped break up potential monotony (because God knows our attention spans are brutally short) |
| Concept: | 10 | well yeah, quotes are always some of the best parts of any given article, so an article essentially made UP of quotes complete with text-based-sounds is brilliant. If i had an ounce of creativity in me I'd copy this style in a heartbeat. |
| Prose and formatting: | 7.2 | welllll ok If i'm being honest, the beginning is a bit of a mess. (mainly just the first interview and before that). there's like 50 links in a single paragraph which is a little offputting and tricky to navigate through. It also MIGHT make sense to have the narrator (you) have your name before your interview lines (i.e.: Orange: "hey stephen smith, fuck you!" SAS: "oh man!") that sort of thing. Also someone is definitely going to freak out over the usage of the "**" which 99% of the time implies AI was used. CLEARLY it was't here, but the "**" is a cursed symbol. (line is: "**tries to duck hailstorm of Dunkin Donuts, stale clam chowder, and moldy oranges being chucked at me by angry New England Patriots and Miami Dolphins fans**") |
| Images: | 8.1 | Images are all funny, they are all kinda just shoved in there, but I also know how miserable it is to try and get them where you want them to be. Using the Joe-Buck.jpg twice might be a little migh especially on a section where you can see both at the same time. COULD be a "style" where you keep re-using it for every time he speaks in a section, but that might be even worse. |
| Miscellaneous: | 8.3 | just an aggregate bc im too lazy to think of anything else |
| Final Score: | 41.6 | this is good! aside from some formatting stuff, i really enjoyed reading it, and its one of those that though quite long, is engaging the entire time. |
| Reviewer: |  M K 01:22, 7 January 2026 (UTC)
| |