Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/UnNews:Microsoft Buys Switzerland
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UnNews:Microsoft Buys Switzerland[edit source]
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| Humour: | 4.5 | It's funny, but not developed enough. Some of the humor doesn't make a lot of clear sense. In addition, I don't think mass murder by Microsoft is as funny as say huge "reprogramming" camps or something. |
| Concept: | 6.8 | The concept is fairly swell. However, I'd like to know more as to why Switzerland would be a good prize for Microsoft to own. Is there a secret operation that will be planned in Switzerland, or a major construction project? |
| Prose and formatting: | 4 | I think the prose could be improved. It seems like some of the same jokes written in a different way would be funnier. Speeling and formatting need some work. |
| Images: | 9 | I LOVE the image. It fits well, and one image is enough. |
| Miscellaneous: | 8 | I give it 8 here, because this baby is going places with a little work. I like the Ipod removal project, but think the interview could be spiced up. Switzerland is definitely not full of dull people, and a stereotypical American teen doesn't fit in this case. |
| Final Score: | 32.3 | If you put a fair amount of quality time into this one, you'll probably have a front-page news story 9as in the main page). |
| Reviewer: | -- Major'GUN' Ggarfield, Le Marquis de Nofu .Complex! 18:09, 5 December 2007 (UTC)
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