Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/UnNews:Hostages taken, Mickey Mouse refuses to negotiate
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UnNews:Hostages taken, Mickey Mouse refuses to negotiate[edit source]
I really like this one, what do you think? 
Pirate Lord__Sonic80 (Yell • Latest literary excretion) __ 19:16, 22 September 2008 (UTC)
| Humour: | 8 | It was funny initially, but eventually the idea that people got kicked in the balls got a little annoying. |
| Concept: | 8 | I like the concept, but it's not the funniest I've ever seen. |
| Prose and formatting: | 7 | Yes, I am a picky prose editor, and you have several misplaced commas and capitalizations in that piece. |
| Images: | 9 | The image you have is just about perfect for this article. I gave it a 9 because it wasn't absolutely hilarious. |
| Miscellaneous: | 8 | Average score of all sections. |
| Final Score: | 40 | You have a good solid article, just spruce it up a little and it's ready for the front page news. |
| Reviewer: |  Velosi-T  {] Screech * Vomit * Mutilations [} 21:16, 27 September 2008 (UTC)
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