Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/UnNews:English villages to be wiped off the face of the earth

Humour:	7.8	I thought it was pretty funny, but it was too repetitive. You might have to come up with some fresh new jokes, and hack out the stale ones.
Concept:	7	I like the concept. I imagine there is a grain of truth in this, and that's a really good thing. However, it is the part about the GPS and sex-dating that is funny, and the wiping the village off the map bit doesn't add much. You might want to change the name to something like, "Turck drivers Marooned by GPS in search of sex partners".
Prose and formatting:	8	Good enough prose and format. But again, the repetitive nature doesn't help. It would be great if you could focus in on one truck driver more, and better tell his whole story. In addition, you ended too abruptly. BTW, if I ever need to outsource some writing I know where to go.
Images:	9.4	GOOD.
Miscellaneous:	10	This article had some serious pizazzes, and erroneous algorithms. In other words, it had a hilarious lewd charm.
Final Score:	42.2	Good job. Spruce it up a bit, and we have a winner (of what though?). This almost deserves a reward in the order of 2,000 Nofu Dollars. Maybe if I get around to it.
Reviewer:	--Major'GUN' Ggarfield, Le Marquis de Nofu .Complex! 04:21, 9 December 2007 (UTC)

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