Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/There, Iowa (resub)
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There, Iowa[edit source]
I wrote this along with Cajek a while back ago, and I need some constructive criticism. What d'ya think?-- 13:26, 17 December 2007 (UTC)
Humour: | 8.1945056 | Quite a bit of humor contained within. I enjoy the plays off of "there," and the inherent ambiguity on the history. |
Concept: | 9.6546324 | Good concept. |
Prose and formatting: | 8.0156572 | There's some minor spelling errors, and the lack of links makes a wall of black text, which causes my eyes to glaze over like a delicious Krispy Kreme donut slipping sensuously off the line into a box, it and eleven of its companions awaiting my every move, and oh dear I believe I have salivated upon your review. I apologize. |
Images: | 9.4621792 | Fine on images. |
Miscellaneous: | 7.3468342 | |
Final Score: | 42.6738086 | |
Reviewer: | Contestant CUN -- VFH NotM Buzz Ctrbs 23:17, 19 December 2007 (UTC) (modified Contestant CUN -- VFH NotM Buzz Ctrbs 00:08, 20 December 2007 (UTC)) |