This article is good I think, but I'd like some advice on how to make myself know that it's good instead of simply thinking it's good.
JJP...MASTER![talk to]JJP... master? 02:08, 2 January 2021 (UTC)
||Pretty funny! Could use a little less pop-culture references though. I liked the part about Hubbard talking about the Tyranids and how they're "the most fucked up alien race he's ever made up."
||Scientology is a comedy GOLDMINE! The title should probably be changed to just "Scientology" or "Scientology's history of the Universe," or something like that.
|Prose and formatting:
||It looks like a LEGIT wikipedia article. I want to give it a perfect score, but there are a lot of red links, and the part with the Pokemon is missing an image, or something. I love the citations from UnNews.
||As a non-scientologist, this shit is funny as fuck. The captions aren't just memes, either. Good work on these!
||As good as an article as this was, I feel it needs a bit of fine-tuning. The removal of red links would make it look better.
||A very good article. I think it could possibly be put up for VFH, however that's just my opinion on it. (You'll get a +1 from me if you do, though.)
||-WohMi, the best damn duelist on this website (talk) 19:25, 29 January 2021 (UTC)