Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/Pyromaniac
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Pyromaniac[edit source]
Hopefully this doesn't suck. Maybe it does. That's what you're here for, though. Yeah, I'm a pee whore, now. - P.M., WotM, & GUN, Sir Led Balloon (Tick Tock) (Contribs) 00:33, Mar 26
Pyromaniac is being reviewed by Your Source for Fine Scented Pee And Whatever Else Comes Out Of Him |
Hey, I think you adopted me once. .../me holds breath... LED, IT'S ME, IT'S ME CAJEK, HI! HI, LED! • <-> Mar 26 (00:57)
- LED? Now there's a name I haven't heard in a long time...a long time... - P.M., WotM, & GUN, Sir Led Balloon
(Tick Tock) (Contribs) 01:06, Mar 26
Humour: | 7.3 | Yes, it's me: The Awesome Cajek. We're studying pyromania in my criminology right now, and I want to see what my favorite Uncyc user (except for <insert name here>) has to say about the whole thing.
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Concept: | 9 | A necessary article. A Led article. A good article. |
Prose and formatting: | 7 | The intro needs to be cleaned up. Get rid of those one sentence paragraphs, or integrate them somewhere else. Everything else seems ok though, as far as I can tell... |
Images: | 7 | Images are fine |
Miscellaneous: | 7.6 | |
Final Score: | 37.9 | I don't think it's VFH worthy yet. Make it twice as long and THEN we'll talk! However, you're definitely on the right track. If you understand the parental-child thing I was talking about, I think it'll be easier to guide this article towards honors. Thank you for giving me the opportunity to review this, Led! Hugs! ...manly hugs. |
Reviewer: | • <-> Mar 26 (04:45) |