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This is a rewrite of Peyton Manning for my usergroup. I'm also going to rewrite Tom Brady along similar lines--or at least I'm planning to. I'd like to hear what I've done with this works or not. So yeah. Review away. —Unführer Guildy Ritter von Guildensternenstein 02:11, 26 May 2009 (UTC)

Humour:	9	Despite being a die hard Patriot and Tom Brady fan, I could not help but to laugh at this article. It was very very amusing, and I especailly loved the part about audibles. The humour hit the point in every aspect of this article, even the parts where the narrator was talking to darlene (who was darlene anyway?). Overall, this has got to be one of the funniest articles I have read since coming here.
Concept:	8	It's a good concept, having some, and apparently drunk, man describing how he thinks Peyton Manning is waaay better than Tom Brady (Which he is not ;)). It may seem odd to some, but you executed this exceptionally well, I think it couldn't get much better than it did. You could have taken a factual approach, but still, this was great.
Prose and formatting:	8	All around, it was well organized, I didn't see any spelling mistakes exceept for the slander, which was intentional, so I'll leave that be. The parts around the middle where darlene was crying was a little iffy, and the end sentences were ab bit odd,=, but other than that, it was great.
Images:	7	Pretty domestic and normal. There's nothing wrong with that, however. At least oyu got some pictures in there.
Miscellaneous:	9	My rating of the article.
Final Score:	41	I love this article. Like I said, it has to be one of the funniest I have read since being here. If you could just fix up some of the bit unfocused parts, the article would be better. And easily feature worthy. If you do that, I'm sure ther'e snothing that would stop this fro being featured!
Reviewer:	Staircase (aka: "Steps") 02:30, 26 May 2009 (UTC)