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Papercupism[edit source]
I know it's kinda small and needs to be filled out, but I'm curious to know what hits and what misses. P.M., WotM, & GUN, Sir Led Balloon 
(Tick Tock) (Contribs) 03:40, 6 June 2007 (UTC)
| Humour: | 6 | Quite funny but appears to be trying to cover too many bases. I would try to concentrate on one or two aspects of papercupism. |
| Concept: | 8 | Good idea but goes of track a bit. On the whole I like it but I'm not sure about the holy trinity. |
| Prose and formatting: | 6 | could do with some kind of reformat appear to be a list in no particular order. |
| Images: | 9 | Go well with the text. good |
| Miscellaneous: | 8 | Overall I would say its well written, its funny, but needs editing. Be brutal with yourself you know you want to. possibly used the words paper cup and dixie too often needs similies. |
| Final Score: | 37 | |
| Reviewer: | --Hugh pym 14:13, 6 June 2007 (UTC) | |