Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/Paintball
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Paintball[edit source]
| Humour: | 5.4 | I can't help it, something this random should not have been that funny, but was I ever laughing! OOps. Anyway, it shouldn't be that: look a cow. No, over there. Anyway, it really shouldn't be that ran...Train, what train? Ok,ok. It needs to be less all over the place and it will be even funnier. Also lay off the E.E. Cummings, jizz, and balls, or otherwise do it more tastefully. Randomness cat is rolling around singing "Smells Like Teen Spirit" and smoking carpet dust! Even though that's funny, it could be better, right? |
| Concept: | 8.5 | Good concept. |
| Prose and formatting: | 3 | I don't think a lot of that could be considered prose. The formatting needs work. That's all. |
| Images: | 8.5 | Love it! get one more image though, preferably of a battle ragging. |
| Miscellaneous: | 6 | Some of those misleading "facts" need to either A. make more sense, or B. get removed. |
| Final Score: | 31.4 | It's got potential, but it's sort of messy right now. Call in the maids, or be one yourself, streamline and unleash the barrel of |
| Reviewer: | -- Major'GUN' Ggarfield, Le Marquis de Nofu .Complex! 01:53, 7 December 2007 (UTC)
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Hey guys. I'm new to Uncyclopedia and I worked on Paintball a little bit- It looked really bad and I didn't want it to be huffed or anything. Yet.