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Model 94 Winchester[edit source]
Your thoughts and comments are much appreciated:
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Major'GUN' Ggarfield, Le Marquis de Nofu .Complex! 21:00, 5 December 2007 (UTC)
| Humour: | 8 | It gave me a nice chuckle. Throw in more words that don't really seem to match together like 'quite frankly kicked ass'. |
| Concept: | 10 | Making fun of guns? Definitely wins in my book. |
| Prose and formatting: | 7 | Using words like 'stinky', unless you're talking about Mr. Winkle, isn't that funny. Try making it something like odorous |
| Images: | 6 | I like the picture of the Jee-man, but more pictures (maybe the head asplosion one for when Chuck kicks Winchester's owner? And maybe something getting shot for 'The Gun of Men') |
| Miscellaneous: | 7.75 | Listen to my comments, or don't. There are probably ways to be funnier than what I suggest, just maybe some things you may want to look at. |
| Final Score: | 38.75 | I really do like the idea. Work it! |
| Reviewer: | --Chicken Chaser 22:15, 5 December 2007 (UTC) | |