Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/Hyperdrinking
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Hyperdrinking[edit source]
Yet another review request. I've done another re-write job on this, and think it's a definite improvement. However, I also thing there's further improving to do, so a constructive review would be most welcome. I tried to leave some of the original text in place, but should the quote go? Should the intro be re-written? Any suggestions for new sections? Any other ideas? Anything? Anyone? Hello? --Sir Under User (Hi, How Are You?) VFH KUN 12:48, 27 September 2007 (UTC)
| Humour: | 6 | I laughed here and there, but it's not a gut-buster. |
| Concept: | 7 | Heh. Getting drunk is always fun. |
| Prose and formatting: | 5 | The concept is good, but the prose needs work. It doesn't read like an encyclopedia article. |
| Images: | 5 | Only the two images, and the beer belly one is disturbing. There HAS to be something better out there. |
| Miscellaneous: | 5 | Good start, just give 'er more lovin'! |
| Final Score: | 28 | It's getting late, and I'm just trying to clear out old Pee Review requests. Pardon my brevity, but at least I'm being honest. |
| Reviewer: | EugeneKay wuz here (whine thank) 04:33, 15 October 2007 (UTC) | |