Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/Hurricane Harvey
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Hurricane Harvey
I spent some times over the last day expanding and it looks good. But I need more feedback, I am ready for feedback.– Preceding unsigned comment added by Gale5050 (talk • contribs)
| Humour: | 3 | Although there were some attempts at humour, generally not very funny. Looks way too much like Wikipedia! |
| Concept: | 7 | Pretty good concept, maybe Harvey can be a sea monster rushing to McDonald's before the breakfast menu expires? |
| Prose and formatting: | 8 | Formatting was very good. Perhaps you can be a guy who patrols the site fixing formatting errors and typos. |
| Images: | 5 | Image was alright, nothing good or bad to say. |
| Miscellaneous: | 6 | Concept was good, although the humour and captions could be improved. |
| Final Score: | 29 | Humour could be improved, although the formatting was excellent. For some examples of good unencyclopedic humour, check Special:RandomInCategory/Featured or some of my articles. |
| Reviewer: | ~ HipponiasCUN - Talk - Contribs - Articles | |
Fixed I removed all the "Wikipedia" stuff come check it out!