Er...yeah, what do you think? - 19:00 4 May Sir FSt. (QotF BFF NotM) YTTETalk!Read!Sign!Whore!CMC!Pee!
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7
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When I clicked on this game, I was expecting that I would be redirected from one page into another, then rapidly back from the same one, nonstop until I raked my eyes out (or pulled the plug on my computer). I was pleased that I had the treat of choosing which direction I went in, rather then being thrown around without any control or say in the matter. Overall, not bad at all, but not outstanding, so… 7 sounds about average.
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| Concept:
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10
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Frankly, what were you smoking when you made this article… and can I have some of it?! While there are quite a couple of senseless loop pages on Uncyclopedia, I can say quite honestly that I have not seen a redirect to a circular room with only two options! However good this article is, there is just one small problem with it… there are exactly two ways to get out of the game, clicking on your user name redirects to your page, and clicking on the “that building” redirects out of the room. I do think that, once in game, those two links can be pacified for the greater glory of the game.
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| Prose and formatting:
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9
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While there were absolutely no spelling or grammar errors, you did run into a slight snag of the game being escapable (is that a real word?), and the “Satisfaction will sweep over you like a deadly tsunami” I find it somewhat hard to believe I would be satisfied with a deadly tsunami killing me, but, meh.
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| Images:
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7
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No images, so I gave the “average” score for it
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| Miscellaneous:
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8.25
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Avg’d as per Pee Review guidelines… now let me out of this room!
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| Final Score:
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41.25
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Yet another high quality article from YTTE, but still in need of a slight working
- Make sure to the best of your ability there is no way out of the room
- Place a picture of the room in the “New Game” section, you can easily draw one using MS pain(t)
- ”Sweep over me like a deadly tsunami? Satisfaction? I think that section is a bit confused, maybe.
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| Reviewer:
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Warm Regards, Javascap
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