Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/Beavis and Butt-Head

Huh-Huh-Huh! Pee on this before Beavis pees his pants! (Shut up Butt-Head!)

Naughtius Maximus F@H Woof! MeowMUN 18:28, 28 September 2008 (UTC)

Humour:	4	There are some elements of fun here, but overall, it reads as a fan's deconstruction of a former phenomenon. To work it should chart the pair's rise to fame and their now (relative) obscurity, and perhaps hint that a new rise is imminent. I might be missing some in-jokes here, but there was nothing that made me titter, let alone laugh - it just seems random thoughout. You need a good angle and should stick to it. B&B as saviours of America would work, as would them as typical high-school drop-outs who happened to influence a bigger picture (cf Forrest Gump or Zellig), but you haven't nailed this yet.
Concept:	6	Yes, they should have a page, but this article presents nothing new as yet.
Prose and formatting:	8	Nothing major here. A few typos, but fixable.
Images:	3	You have some, but they say nothing new. The titles may amuse, but they aren't really related to the article's direction.
Miscellaneous:	4	Umm. Lacks fizz and direction. Personally B&B aren't me thing, but even if I loved 'em, this artcile wouldn't make me laugh, change my view or see their potential.
Final Score:	25	It's an article and it makes sense, of sorts. Decide what it is really trying to say and then say it.
Reviewer:	Asahatter (annoy) 23:32, 31 October 2008 (UTC)

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