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Arrows Grand Prix International Ltd[edit source]

I hope this is how to request a Pee Review. I put some time into this (3 hours). Risviltsov (talk) 06:25, 14 January 2020 (UTC)

Humour: 6 Starts off incredibly funny, drops off at the end and just recounts race history. Mentions "lads" way too much. If this is intentional and I'm not British enough to understand it, please feel free to call me a twat or some other British insult.
Concept: 8 Honestly I wouldn't think this would be a good concept (In fact when I read it I thought it would be some sort of spambot page), but wow. You managed to make this work.
Prose and formatting: 9.5 Stupendous formatting. I assume that this is because that it was sporked from a Wikipedia article, but wow.
Images: 9 8! 8 images! While they aren't particularly funny, the captions are fantastic.
Miscellaneous: 5 Unfortunately, towards the middle of this article it falls into a "I am recounting the history of this with small commentary." Try to add more funnies, or change up some details to make it positively zany/wacky/funny!
Final Score: 37.5 Ever think about how F1 cars sound like the Jericho sirens on the Stuka dive bombers? I wonder if that freaks out the local World War 2 veterans.
Reviewer: WohMi, the Dueling King (talk) 21:53, 6 May 2021 (UTC)