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Another "You" take[edit source]
And thus you rate 10 on all categories of note. --Sir General Minister G5 FIYC UPotM [Y] #21 F@H KUN 13:32, 13 July 2008 (UTC)
| Humour: | 5 | A good concept stretched out for too long. Try to start smaller and end bigger, and perhaps have some theme about what "you" are doing - some series of actions which "you" do that gets progressively more ridiculous or violent, for example. Have it relate to your concept. |
| Concept: | 8 | Yes, I totally agree that the vast majority of articles that get featured are not written in the encyclopedic style, and that this is a problem. |
| Prose and formatting: | 8 | Yep, you got the number of those "you" articles there. |
| Images: | 5 | Not exactly spectacular image quality, but that's not really what your article is about anyway. |
| Miscellaneous: | 5 | Like I said, I think you need to sustain the humour by adding another funny element to the article. As it is, it's just one joke spread over a page. I'll leave it to you to decide what. |
| Final Score: | 31 | Good luck with any rewrites! If this review seems sparse to you and you have more questions, don't hesitate to contact me. |
| Reviewer: | YouFang 19:49, 25 July 2008 (UTC) | |