UnScripts talk:24 (television show)

-- Yes, 24/Doctor Who crossover. We should definitely do something like that in the DW topic.

But in the mean time, we still need information on the FOX Remake.

I'm thinking we should put in a list of each season, reflecting on the characters and actors (Most of the time are actors who looks similar, or would be completely innappropriate for the part) in the series.

And the stories too. But make it funny.

-- Okay, but I also think that if we do that we will need more information on the "classic" 24 to balance it out... We should put in some info on the plots of the seasons for that too. We should also come up with a reason it's called 24, but it should be something entirely inappropreate.

Spoiler warning?

This article needs a spoiler warning on it. I don't care if this isn't wikipedia, if that stuff about President Logan is true, you've just spoiled part of series 5 for me.

The stuff about Rosie O'Donnell is true too. 69.150.176.176 18:39, 28 April 2007 (UTC)

Nvm

The whole "classic" 24 thing doesn't really do anything. I don't know why I thought it would work.

The "new" 24 section needs work too. The character descriptions aren't that great, and we need to talk more about the show.

And remember guys, make it funny, otherwise it will turn into the Jack Bauer topic (Which is currently deleted)

Yeah

I totally agree with that. Though I do find the "classic" section rather funny, it severely needs more info. Actually, the only truly funny thing about that section is the Jack Bauer picture. The character descriptions aren't funny, and the "future" section needs some serious help. (sorry to sound as if I'm complaining, but I tried to change it, but whoever it was that wrote it changed it back!)

Agreed, this needs to be funnier. I say we add more info to the "classic" secion, and try to find things that would make it laugh-out-loud funny.

Pee Review

Humour:	10	Good. Parts that made me laugh were "Can't wait to get the Wikipedia article copy", the picture of the baby lion with the caption saying how it ate someone, a gay costume drama, this article's fake!, he defected to the FOX side, the picture saying if Jack had it his way the show'd be called 12, the picture with Jack holding a gun saying it is normal for him, the "Yo Joe!", "what?", "Nvrmind!", and then the vandalism part was solid! Sprinkled minor jokes everywhere, which builds up. I never really laughed but I was smiling while I read this.
Concept:	7	It's an unscript of the show's creators eager to see the Wikipedia article and it sucked. They hate how it sucked and try to kill them. Points off because this UnScripts (script as in movie) and the title of a TV show. So I thought'd it be a script for the episode.
Prose and formatting:	7	Grammar mistakes (unintentional) in places. Could use a reread. Fix 'em. You know?
Images:	6	Only 1 image you put in there that was funny if it were to go w/o a caption.
Miscellaneous:	7.5	Averaged other scores.
Final Score:	37.5	I think this would pass with ease on VFH. I'll probably nominate it soon.
Reviewer:	Sir Peasewhizz Biblio HOS Awards 23:09 3.24.13