Talk:Jesus Christos
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From Pee Review[edit source]
My first ever Uncyclopedia article per se (as in, not UnNews). I'm not that great with all the wiki formatting since I am new to it, so I am sure that's the first thing that could use improvement. And the text can be expanded by some of the comedic geniuses around here I am sure. Hopefully it's a good start though. --Composure1 04:45, 4 January 2007 (UTC)
| Humour: | 6 | Could use a bit more jokes; hard for Jesus though considering every single one has been made for Him and new ones just seem redundant. The whole Christos Latin root species/video game character thingamashit can be ellaborated upon. |
| Concept: | 4 | If this idea popped into my head I would probably not do for fear of stressing another Jesus article. |
| Prose and formatting: | 9 | Formatting and terminology is great, good job. It looks like you referenced an actual wiki-article. |
| Images: | 7 | Great images, not exactly halarious but relatively pertinant. |
| Miscellaneous: | 0 | |
| Final Score: | 26 | I'll nominate this for a feature if you can buffer it with some more humor. |
| Reviewer: | --AmericanBastard 07:54, 4 January 2007 (UTC) | |
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The possessive s is not "its", but "it's", and also, since there were fewer spellings in Ummerican than British, I changed some... threeish words to the British form of spelling, which usually is considered a more "scientific" sounding text. At least to us who still speak Proper English™... ;) -- Luverly - (Contribs) (Talk) 
Grammar Nazi, Mum , BFF & NotM, CUN , GMP . - Perkele! 18:40, 8 Feb