Talk:Jesus Christos

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My first ever Uncyclopedia article per se (as in, not UnNews). I'm not that great with all the wiki formatting since I am new to it, so I am sure that's the first thing that could use improvement. And the text can be expanded by some of the comedic geniuses around here I am sure. Hopefully it's a good start though. --Composure1 04:45, 4 January 2007 (UTC)

Humour: 6 Could use a bit more jokes; hard for Jesus though considering every single one has been made for Him and new ones just seem redundant. The whole Christos Latin root species/video game character thingamashit can be ellaborated upon.
Concept: 4 If this idea popped into my head I would probably not do for fear of stressing another Jesus article.
Prose and formatting: 9 Formatting and terminology is great, good job. It looks like you referenced an actual wiki-article.
Images: 7 Great images, not exactly halarious but relatively pertinant.
Miscellaneous: 0
Final Score: 26 I'll nominate this for a feature if you can buffer it with some more humor.
Reviewer: --AmericanBastard 07:54, 4 January 2007 (UTC)


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The possessive s is not "its", but "it's", and also, since there were fewer spellings in Ummerican than British, I changed some... threeish words to the British form of spelling, which usually is considered a more "scientific" sounding text. At least to us who still speak Proper English™... ;) -- Luverly - (Contribs) (Talk) Heart anim.gif Brainwashed to be British and then some. Certifiably MORE British than You. Grammar Nazi, Mum , BFF & NotM, CUN , GMP . - Perkele! 18:40, 8 Feb