Talk:Fluff (spread)
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Moooooore Hatching! Cut! Burn! Rip it out!!!! Let it suffer!!! ...such that the article may prosper! Nice work so far! MrN 
22:13. Mar 17. 2013
- Er, I don't know what else to cut. Could you help? 22:27 3.17.13
- And I'm also considering renaming it to Fluffernutter. 22:29 3.17.13
- You want me to hatchet your article? Like actual editing you mean? Careful I have a big chopper. Honest. ... ... I'm more into idle criticism at the moment. I still feel that large chunks of it can be re-worked and re-worded in a more punchy and funny way. I have tried to do that in a few of your articles, and might have a go at a few more sometime tomorrow. I think some sections of it can be cut out, and the good ideas used in the sections which you keep. Get the word count down... Perhaps the thing for you to consider doing for a while is to pick just one article that you really like, and work really hard on just that one for a bit. I noticed that you are creating lots of "good" articles, and that's obviously awesome, but I also think you might benefit if you tried focusing really hard on just one for a while. You know... Try to make it "perfect". Then you will learn a lot which is useful when you write lots of other stuff. Wait. I'm rambling like shit. Fuck. What the hell am I talking about? I have no idea. MrN
22:52. Mar 17. 2013
- You want me to hatchet your article? Like actual editing you mean? Careful I have a big chopper. Honest. ... ... I'm more into idle criticism at the moment. I still feel that large chunks of it can be re-worked and re-worded in a more punchy and funny way. I have tried to do that in a few of your articles, and might have a go at a few more sometime tomorrow. I think some sections of it can be cut out, and the good ideas used in the sections which you keep. Get the word count down... Perhaps the thing for you to consider doing for a while is to pick just one article that you really like, and work really hard on just that one for a bit. I noticed that you are creating lots of "good" articles, and that's obviously awesome, but I also think you might benefit if you tried focusing really hard on just one for a while. You know... Try to make it "perfect". Then you will learn a lot which is useful when you write lots of other stuff. Wait. I'm rambling like shit. Fuck. What the hell am I talking about? I have no idea. MrN
- And I'm also considering renaming it to Fluffernutter. 22:29 3.17.13
- Er, I don't know what else to cut. Could you help? 22:27 3.17.13