Talk:Artificial Grass

uhh, pee review or something idk

Humour:	4	I didn't really laugh at it, but I think it has some potential. Maybe a section about artificial animals that eat the artificial grass?
Concept:	5	The concept is a bit... all over the place. I think expanding a bit more on each idea presented in the sections, or even removing some sections, would help with the overall readability.
Prose and formatting:	7	It is, for the most part, coherent, if a bit grammatically awkward. However, I feel like it could use a few more links in sections other than "See also", so it looks like a real wiki page. Again, I feel the main issue here is the length of each section. I also suggest moving the page to the title "Artificial grass" to match how Wikipedia usually capitalizes things.
Images:	1	No images. Although I would suggest playing around with which sections to expand, which ones to keep, which ones to remove, etc, before putting images in them. I recommend MK's Corner for any images you want to request.
Miscellaneous:	4.3	Average of your other scores.
Final Score:	21.3	The article is a bit stubby, but I could see it becoming a full article someday. And don't let the low score discourage you, writing humor takes a lot of practice and trial and error. In this case, seeking out a Pee Review is probably the right thing to do.
Reviewer:	--Dame Fish on skates DUN VFH UotM 17:26, 23 March 2026 (UTC)

There's definitely some good humor to start with and some potential in this article. MrX blow me 18:10, 23 March 2026 (UTC)