User talk:Yitzaklr

Nice start to your article - don't forget to add a few links, though. Just place [[ and ]] either side of the word you want to turn into a link, like this. I'll be looking forward to reading some more of your work. Oh - and welcome to Uncyclopedia. You'll get a proper official welcome from someone or other over at the Welcoming Committee at some point soon. :-) Rabbi Techno kvetch Contribs FOXES 10:53, October 20, 2010 (UTC)

Is this the proper way to reply? I couldnt find a button. I tried some links and i was gonna but my alarm didnt go off becus of the french and then i got up anyway and typed some links but then my dog deleted my changes, and also, how do you do a citation needed thingy? Also, i tried putting an external link on a regular word but it didnt work. (This: [www.wikipedia.org a more unscrupulous wiki] thanks for the review, now maybe i wont bring an ak47 to the internet and kill everyone on youtube.

If I may kibitz--your reply got in, obviously, but please SIGN them by typing four straight tildes (~~~~). Most people indent replies, as I've done here. Spıke ¬ 21:32 20-Oct-10

UnNews:France nukes self

Thanks for contributing to UnNews! I've made some minor changes regarding syntax, which are explained in the Change Summaries. Images must go on a line by themselves, and must be outside any paragraph. Then again, you don't seem to use paragraphs, which is between you and your grammar teacher.

More importantly, the Sources aren't formatted correctly, and I assume that's because they don't exist. You are allowed to do UnNewses that aren't based on real news, but just mark the article with {{Original}}, as I've done, this time. The Sources help your reader figure out what the joke was, if he or you are too dumb, and are normally not part of the joke.

There is one conceptual problem, if I may try to quote a piece of our UnNews:Style guide from memory: The fact that something happened to UnNews, or to the UnNews reporter, is not news! It will sound more realistic if you take yourself out of the reporting.

I hope you will keep working on this piece, read the Style Guide entirely, and be back soon with more. Spıke ¬ 21:30 20-Oct-10

Also, no extra capital letters in UnNews headlines! I've renamed the story and you can edit it as shown at the top of this section. Spıke ¬ 23:53 28-Oct-10

Article Edits/Replacement

Hey just thought I'd log back on to check on things and I saw your entry on my discussion. Thanks for putting something there, your article is by far better than anything I was planning to do at the moment. — The Rift (grumble) MUN CPT DAD 18:52, December 14, 2010 (UTC)