User:Shabidoo/happymonkeycompetition/2015/Cat the Colourful Scores and comments

Happy Monkey Competition 2015

Results and scores for Cat

From Sarah[edit | edit source]

Creativity	Humour	Originality	Total
8/10	8,5/10'	7/10	23,5/30

I liked 'Early paintings on murals and sculptures have not only shown the poor painting skills of the non-nomadic cultures...' and 'leopard patterned clothes as potentially dangerous for mental health'.The 'borderline insanity' made me laugh. Also the line about closets and corpses and bad behaving children is funny; the pic is creative, especially the line on the instructions. Good job!

From GrammarFegelein[edit | edit source]

Creativity	Humour	Originality	Total
7/10	8/10	7.5/10	22.5/30

The two pictures are very good and there are lots of funny lines in this article. There may be 2 articles about furniture in this competition, but both are completely different.

Some of the lines I liked:

simply using them as throwable weapons in relationship-related conflicts.
Most often furniture is used as potential platforms for cats and other furry animals for all types of sleep-related activity,
Not only suitable for storaging smaller piece of furniture but also corpses and badly behaving children,

That's it, ~~Ciao!~~ Meow!

From Shabidoo[edit | edit source]

Creativity	Humour	Originality	Total
7.5/10	6/10	7.5/10	21/30

using them as throwable weapons in relationship-related conflicts
Most often furniture is used as potential platforms for cats and other furry
hence the "fur"niture...only you could pull of such a cheesy line yet be funny
were simple objects carved from stone, such as beds and cupboards
1) sleep on it or 2) cause damage to your surroundings with it. (FUNNNNY!!!)

Most furniture is rumoured to be built within the 7th circle of Hell.

The final picture and caption.

original lines i liked:

according to historians the stone-carved tables were mighty in combat.
should be banned amongst the likes of television programs, comic books and leopard patterned clothes

Overall it is creative and original...though again, I think your ideas would come out stronger if you infused a concept into the article (for example...furniture as a symbol of the bourgious and references to hugh cuisine and communist revolts infused into every line). You had the starting out of it...but I think you can intensify the concept (in most of your articles that is).

For humour sake...a decent ratio of humour to text. I especially liked the damage to your surroundings within it. A fantablastic happymonkey showing as always Mr. Cat. ShabiDOO 15:43, 3 August 2015 (UTC)

From THS[edit | edit source]

Score
7/10

Hmm, didn't I already read an article about furniture? Huh, oh well. I do like how this was written more in article format, though the last image takes up too much space. Maybe throw it some "see also" links and a template? ~[t h s] UotM 06:18, 08/05/2015