User:Shabidoo/happymonkeycompetition/2012/Cat the Colourful
Pee reviews for: Cat the Colourful
Article: Polytheism
Pee Review from Shabidoo
Creativity: | 7/10 |
I'm giving you a very generou seven for creativity, theres little content but its utterly awash in creativity. |
Originality: | 7/10 |
I've never seen an article that quite did this, and I was expecting an article about how all sorts of gods are stupid or crazy...so...nice one. |
Cleverness: | 7/10 |
This sort of ties in with the previous two, it was clever to go with the polyester concept and the woman in the burka (from a monotheistic religion) should be wearing polyester was rather clever. |
Content and Images: | 2/10 |
I gave you a two because there is little content and an empty section. A couple mystakes, (believe IN god), I don't understand the last sentence of the first paragraph. |
Points for whatever reason: | 2/10 |
And I'll give you two points for participating and having started an article that you simply MUST finish because it has obvious potential and I know for a fact that you can turn it into a featurable article. Well done on the creative and clever front! |
Final Score: | 25/50 |
Thanks for participating young man. If you need anything here explained or have questions or need examples, let me know. |
Comments: |
Score and Comments from Wilytank[edit | edit source]
3/10 Unfortunate really. Polyester is a good idea to base polytheism off of, but this is too damn short. --Wilytank can be a pain in the ass. 12:33, February 17, 2012 (UTC)
Score and Comments from PopGoesTheWeasel[edit | edit source]
1/10
Score and Comments from Mattsnow[edit | edit source]
3/10
Unfinished stub, sorry Cat :( Mattsnow 18:21, February 13, 2012 (UTC)
Score and Comments from Joe9320[edit | edit source]
7/10
Score and Comments from Chief[edit | edit source]
2/10
A real shame that this is unfinished as the first line sets out a brilliant concept that deserves an article to go with it. I hope you finish this one off at some point.
Final Score[edit | edit source]
41/100