Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/Zootopia Syndrome
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Zootopia Syndrome[edit source]
Willy on wheels (talk) 14:22, 20 May 2021 (UTC)
Humour: | 5.5 | It's funny, but could use some improvement as it's main (and only) joke is "Zootopia turns you into a furry!" |
Concept: | 5 | Concept is alrgight, but the problem with the article is that despite being an 'article' on "Zootopia Syndrome," Zootopia isn't mentioned as often as I would expect. |
Prose and formatting: | 7 | Eh. Alright. I don't have anything to complain about, it's just that the sections don't have a whole lot of content. I would combine a couple sections into bigger ones so that it looks more meaty. |
Images: | 4.5 | Image is alright, but there's only one and it's not too funny, either. |
Miscellaneous: | 2 | The writing in this article is REALLY meta... not meta in the sense of Uncyclopedia meta, but meta in the sense of Writing about Furries-meta. It feels like I've read this article a good 5 times before in different places on the internet. I'd suggest giving it some extra "flair" to distinguish it from other, similar. Have the CDC involved in it or something, I don't know... but try to diversify it from all the other furry-shaming things on the internet. |
Final Score: | 24 | This article reminded me of a certain gif in the discord... eaugh. Truly unholy. |
Reviewer: | WohMi, the Dueling King (talk) 15:50, 20 May 2021 (UTC) |