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This article is a work in progress, I'll add more wines, more images and a better intro later. But does the concept work as is?--Nydas 19:41, 13 November 2007 (UTC)

Good concept so far; has great potential. I'll refrain from giving a full Pee Review seeing as how the article isn't complete yet, but when it is, let me know and I'll be more than happy to review it for ya. Cheers! --EMC ^[TALK] 19:51, 13 November 2007 (UTC)

I'll take this one, if anyone's looking in... --Sir Under User (Hi, How Are You?) VFH KUN 17:10, 18 November 2007 (UTC)

Humour:	7	It may be unfinished, but there's no denying the quality on show so far.
Concept:	9	Oh yes, I like it. Plenty of potential, several directions you could take, all promising. I get the feeling I'll really enjoy it when it's finished.
Prose and formatting:	8	Well written so far, you're capturing the feel of a great many wine writers here. Not certain about the line "You can nary be serious, my friend" - not certain the word 'nary' fits there. Just needs expansion, but you've got that covered, right?
Images:	5	Needs more pics, but again, you've got that covered, according to your note above.
Miscellaneous:	7.5	Average of above scores. Rounded up a bit, because I like it!
Final Score:	36.5	A really promising article. I'll refrain from my usual flood of extra comments as you say you plan to add more later. But if you want suggestions, give me a shout on my talk page. One thought - a paragraph or two on the basics of wine tasting up front would be good. Give me a shout if EMC's busy when you finish it and want another review, I'll be interested to see how this turns out!
Reviewer:	--Sir Under User (Hi, How Are You?) VFH KUN 17:25, 18 November 2007 (UTC)