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User:Simsilikesims/Prevention[edit source]
-- Simsilikesims(♀UN) Talk here. 05:00, May 23, 2012 (UTC)
- All-righty I believe I'll take a crack at this. - Fe+3 AlFe+2
Humour: | 6.4 | A good start but definitely room for improvement. Here's my point by point dissection of what's there.
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Concept: | 8 | An article on prevention is a good idea (duh) and discussing various forms of prevention is certainly an acceptable direction to take the article. |
Prose and formatting: | 10 | I didn't notice any outstanding grammatical issues. Sentence structures appear to be sound. Nuff said. |
Images: | 0 | The best way to give feedback on images is for there to first be images in place (hint hint, wink wink, nudge nudge). |
Miscellaneous: | 6.1 | Average of scores. I also noticed the lack of links to other articles making this one a bit of a dead end...fix that too. |
Final Score: | 30.5 | Great start...I look forward to checking up on this page when it exists in a state of completion. |
Reviewer: | Fe+3 AlFe+2 |