Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/User:Kitkats/HowTo:become a Douche

Made this review page for Kitkats. - P.M., WotM, & GUN, Sir Led Balloon (Tick Tock) (Contribs) 11:33, Mar 4

Humour:	6	It might just be me, but I didn’t find this article to be too particularly funny. That slam on the politicians, however, was simply… Excellent
Concept:	6	While it definitally was not a bad concept, it seemed to me as more of a slander at a specific group of people (which, to the best of my knowledge is encouraged!) but I have seen a fair chunk of.
Prose and formatting:	6	The sentences in the article were, for the most part, simple. Mostly “This caused this and that. After which, this happened.” Don’t be afraid to go out on a limb with your sentences, feel free to spice things up a bit
Images:	7	The pictures contributed quite well to the article, but lacked the humour that I have come to associate Uncyclopedia and pictures with. Throw in a funny picture, or change one of the captions to be funny, and I will cheer a bit stronger! (an example, take the puppy picture and place “This douche is trying to turn the puppies into douches!”)
Miscellaneous:	6.25	Averaged as per Pee Review guidelines.
Final Score:	31.25	While not exactly a VFH article, this one definitally has some potential. In a can, I would recommend reviewing HTBFANJS (not that this article was stupid! I am not even going to try to imply that!) in order in increase the humour in this article. Go over it once, check it again twice, have a friend read it, then submit it for another Pee to review. Good luck!
Reviewer:	Warm regards, Javascap 03:15, 6 March 2008 (UTC)

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