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User:Gubby/The Meaning Of Life[edit source]
Better than the current Meaning of life?
Gubby 23:30, 29 February 2008 (UTC)
| Humour: | 6 | I didn't really find it too terribly funny. Rather, I found the Censored parts to be a bit irritating. But that's nothing that Ctrl+A can't solve. This section isn't really about the formatting, it's more about the humor value of the whole article and so I still thought it was worth taking into account in this score. As for the jokes, they were pretty good at spots, but most of it was pretty dry. I guess I just wasn't in such a good mood after I loaded up your page to find huge black rectangles all over the place. But that's just me. |
| Concept: | 7 | The concept is actually not bad, I could see this being a good first person article. But you're going to have to do a lot better than this one to be mainspace-worthy. I think if the humor was a bit better, than this concept score would go up a bit. I tend to judge both how funny your concept is and whether or not you follow it in this category. As this article isn't that funny at the moment, this will stay a 7. |
| Prose and formatting: | 6 | While your writing is fine, since you're a great writer, the reason that this score is so low is because of those ghastly Censored templates all over the place. I hate those things. You really need to work something out with this. Maybe italicize them instead? I can definitely see the importance of having those little comments set aside and distinguished from the rest of the text, but you just need to find another, less annoying way to do it. I'm not digging the censors. |
| Images: | 0 | Graah, I just can't give you credit here. Even something like Nihilism.png would be cool with a caption just saying "The meaning of life." However, feel free to be as creative as possible with your images. You knew you were going to get a zero here, so don't act surprised when you see the low score you're getting. Sorry, that's just the way it is. |
| Miscellaneous: | 4.8 | Averaged. |
| Final Score: | 23.8 | Two things here: expansion, and ix-naying them censors. Other than that, I got nothing else for you. Oh, and images. Get some images. So I guess that makes three things. Let me know if you want some more help with this, I'd be more than happy to. Nice rewrite so far, good luck with it, kiddo. |
| Reviewer: | ~Minitrue Sir SysRq! Talk! Sex! =/ GUN • WotM • RotM • AotM • VFH • SK • PEEING • HP • BFF @ 22:03 Mar 1 | |