Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/UnNews:Man suspects that his die is broken
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UnNews:Man suspects that his die is broken[edit source]
Trying to get back in the swing of writing. This is a warm-up, and is by no means good, but I like the idea. -- §. | WotM | PLS | T | C | A 03:12, 4 January 2008 (UTC)
| Humour: | 8 | That's some cerebral, trippy stuff. I like dry humor, and while it isn't a laffer, it's a thinker. But it's NOT Thinkerer. |
| Concept: | 8 | A thrilling concept indeed. Well, not thrilling. But interesting. |
| Prose and formatting: | 8 | Short, but then again, I don't know how you'd expand it. Some minor typos and omitted words. |
| Images: | 4 | There's just the one, and there's some potential for some good'ns. Like some NASA guys examining something. Or something. |
| Miscellaneous: | 8 | Brilliant Euroipods refference. |
| Final Score: | 36 | Overall it's a good warm-up for what I'm sure will be a Jordan-esque comeback. |
| Reviewer: | --  03:22, 4 January 2008 (UTC)
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I thought it was really funny. Just add another picture or two, fix the few spelling errors and it'd be perfect. --Blink 06:28, 6 January 2008 (UTC)