Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/UnNews:Forty-two killed in ongoing QVFD genocide
Jump to navigation
Jump to search
UnNews:Forty-two killed in ongoing QVFD genocide[edit source]
This was made to the theme of my random playlist, starting with Atlas by Battles and ending with Harder, Better, Faster, Stronger by Daft Punk. Thought you should know. ... This will get me banned by someone, I just know it. :( 
Contestant CUN -- VFH NotM Buzz Ctrbs 07:01, 31 December 2007 (UTC)
- Hey Moneke. Read the guidelines. Don't review until you do, okay?! • <-> Jan 9 (06:04)
Sorry, I have food poisoning after eating bad food so I'm cranky --Moneke 07:03, 9 January 2008 (UTC)
- Thank you, but I doubt you read THE GUIDELINES. You just increased the score. This person doesn't give a crap if you like it, Moneke, they want to know how to improve it. Understand? Sorry if I'm being rough on you, but someone recently got banned for continually harassing this one other dude on Pee Review with bad reviews. "BAD REVIEWS" means short, insulting, or useless, not bad scores, Moneke! Thanks for trying anyway *SIGH* • <-> Jan 9 (15:40)
| Humour: | 7 | Parts were funny, but it was a bit in jokey and all over the place. I didn't understand what was going on for the first few lines but it all came together near the end. Some parts were laugh-out-loud funny. The problem is many people outside Uncyclopedia may not understand it. |
| Concept: | 7.5 | Clever using the Kenya genocide after the election. Good Idea, you could expand on this in many directions. |
| Prose and formatting: | 6 | It didn't really seem like real news; the Quotes could sound a bit more official and it could be organized into better paragraphs. |
| Images: | 6 | Alright. The images were good for the text, but not very funny, I suggest you go to RadicalX's corner for some images, or have some actual images from the genocide or something. |
| Miscellaneous: | 6.8 | Av'ed |
| Final Score: | 33.3 | Good idea, carried out rather averagely but it had its moments. I suggest you look at some of the featured UnNews articles to make it sound more official. I read it twice over and it was better the second time. Keep writing! |
| Reviewer: | --Moneke 05:07, 9 January 2008 (UTC) | |