Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/UnNews:"Starve the Beast", Trump says

I believe I've done an excellent job, but I want feedback - I can always improve. - Risviltsov Yell at me!

Looks pretty perfect to me. I'm adding it to recent unnews in the meantime. ~ Kakun · talk 03:54, 5 April 2020 (UTC)

Humour:	2	The humor in the article is that it's a serious thing written in a slightly irreverent tone. While this can be funny sometimes, I personally don't find it very funny here. There's some decent jokes in the first part, but it falls apart after that. It would be improved if the entire article had jokes, not just parts of it.
Concept:	4.5	Maybe it's just because this article was relevant a while ago and is less relevant nowadays, but I don't really get what most of the article has to do with the title.
Prose and formatting:	9	The bold text makes this look like an actual news article. I like that. Grammar is also good.
Images:	4	The Trump image is pretty funny even by itself, but a lot of the other images aren't very funny, and the captions feel more like insults.
Miscellaneous:	8	Going to give this an 8 here, because the time barrier likely made me rate this lower than I would have if it was still 2020.
Final Score:	27.5	Might be a time barrier issue here. I'm also not fully up with the context.
Reviewer:	Willy on Wheels! On Wheels! (Babbling ~ Recent ramblings) 17:10, 19 May 2025 (UTC)

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