Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/Stereotype
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Stereotype[edit source]
I'd like this to become a feature. I'm slowing down on new stuff, but I'm going to still be polishing up some of my previous stuff. Pup
- I'll try and write a review this evening--if not then, it may be a few days, though. —Unführer Guildy Ritter von Guildensternenstein 16:29, November 18, 2009 (UTC)
- No mad rush. When it gets done is when it gets done. Pup
Humour: | 8.25 | Though the beginning falls a little bit more on the dry, expository side, the "Beginner's Guide to Stereotypes" section is hilarious. Whenever someone is able to take the very, very tried concept of stereotypes and make it feel fresh and original while simultaneously keeping the article firmly in "stereotype" territory at the same time, you know you've got a good article on your hands.
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Concept: | 9 | In terms of concept, this is very similar to my Biology article in that it's very much a pun/"Rickroll". You succeed where I failed in Biology, however, by incorporating humor and elements from stereotypes into your article, while my article has zero references to actual biology. Nice job. |
Prose and formatting: | 8.5 | Excellent. There are no spelling or grammatical errors, and the little "wots" and "Achtungs" you through in immediately established what stereotype you were talking about in a humorous and unexpected way without breaking up the tone of the article. Some users would probably feel that there's a bit too much whitespace, but seeing as [[|Andrei Tarkovsky|I'm the king of whitespace]], I sympathize with what you're going for. |
Images: | 7.75 | All the images complement the text really, really well, though no one image is funny in its own right except maybe for your puppy sig picture. One minor complaint I have is that some pictures have white backgrounds while some do not, though this is such a trifling and insignificant criticism that you shouldn't even considering potentially doing anything about it. |
Miscellaneous: | 8.75 | What I would score this as a whole, as I very much enjoyed it. |
Final Score: | 42.25 | Make whatever changes and revisions you're going to make, and then feel free to nominate this for VFH. |
Reviewer: | —Unführer Guildy Ritter von Guildensternenstein 20:06, November 19, 2009 (UTC) |