Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/Snowmobile

Here's a new one I'm working on. Just looking for some input. -- Spillin DylanTALKEDITS02:21, April 30 2008

Humour:	8	This is a pretty funny article, with something to laugh at almost everywhere. It needs a little more content, and you could talk about Russia needing snowmobiles, but its a pretty funny article.
Concept:	7	An article about a snowmobile, and the usage in Canada and stuff, its got a good concept. once again, you could have talked about more uses.
Prose and formatting:	7.5	Formatted pretty well. a bit of a jumble toward the bottom. Otherwise, It was formatted pretty well.
Images:	6	Theres only 2 images. However, they both have a pretty funny comment, so Im giving a 6.
Miscellaneous:	7	Overall, a pretty good article. You REALLY should have a few quotes, like: " “They are used in very cold places!” ~ Captain Obvious on snowmobiles " or something like that. Talk more about other countries use.
Final Score:	35.5	A pretty funny article. i know you said you're still working on it, so i want you let me know when its finished :)
Reviewer:	~ N E Z L R 15:12, 1 May 2008 (UTC)

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