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Scrub typhus: the geographic distribution of phenotypic and genotypic variants of Orientia tsutsugamushi[edit source]
I could use some feedback on this article, I think.
18:06, 27 March 2009 (UTC)Too many long words and makes the article look boring. Try to shorten the article too and use more jokes. Teh • • ) 13:12, 1 April 2009 (UTC)
(Absolutely hilarious, I laughed the whole way through. Definitely nominated. Gas Pump 14:10, 1 April 2009 (UTC)
Humour: | Not bad. Could be funnier. If only there were some sort of project where you could list your article and get meaningful feedback. That might help you. A LOT. | |
Concept: | You really shouldn't attack hard-working scientists. Can you imagine how hard it must be for DJ Kelley, working two jobs just to put food on her family? | |
Prose and formatting: | 4 | Needs more line breaks. |
Images: | So beautiful, closing the window brought a tear to my eye. The had kid has kind of a creepy stare, though. | |
Miscellaneous: | 9 | My favorite part was that one section with the stuff. I loved that. Write that part again. |
Final Score: | 13 | A++++++ WOULD READ AGAIN. SHIPPING WAS SPEEDY |
Reviewer: | --C:\syndrome\_ 03:45, 27 April 2009 (UTC)Good job |