Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/Norelco (resubmit)

Cleaned up and resubmitted. Removed most of the {{c}} tags, and added two new images. Megalomaniac Martin “The Unfortunately Unfeatured” Ultima • (VOTE FOR ME!) • talk • (AND MY PICS TOO!) • contribs 17:25, 3 July 2007 (UTC)

Humour:	6	Not bad, but not hilarious either. More jokes would help.
Concept:	6	I tend to enjoy company related articles more when they are constructed around a basic, funny, satirical idea. This is lacking in satire.
Prose and formatting:	5	Linking to actual articles in the style you have done can be funny. However, in this they are all redlinks, and that is just ugly.
Images:	9	The images are undoubtedly the best part of this article. Good stuff.
Miscellaneous:	7	Generally just lacking anything special, and there are still a few issues that should be fixed, as I have mentioned above.
Final Score:	33	I doubt that this has a chance on VFH at the moment. You should at least fix the redlinks first.
Reviewer:	Sir Cs1987 UOTM. t. c 02:19, 4 July 2007 (UTC)

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