Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/Non-Huffable Kitten (resubmit)
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Non-Huffable Kitten[edit source]
I need help on this, I think that featuring it or getting more attention to it will make it better, by having people editing it.
- Featuring is only for articles that are "exceptionally" good... You can't make people edit pages. I guess my best suggestion is to categorize it, but I saw you already put it in a ctegory "Pages That Need Help", so there's not much more you can do. Hopefully, a good pee reviewer will come. I'm not good at reviewing longer pages.--Sir Manforman 19:24, 18 August 2007 (UTC)
Humour: | 3 | What is it with you and Barney? Seriously Barney, Paris Hilton etc. is not funny. This article seems to just reference every other article on Uncyclopedia - like its trying to steal their humour. There's nothing funny about plagiarism. You may remember I reviewed AKHM as well. This is better but only just. I'll give you the same advice that I did before. Remove all the stupid jokes and rewrite. I think this was the only funny line This cat also has the ability to slightly tint his own fur color to a light brown, to confuse any potential huffers and give him an excuse to murder them. |
Concept: | 7 | I guess it had to be done. |
Prose and formatting: | 7 | Fine |
Images: | 7 | Cute kittens. |
Miscellaneous: | 4 | Am I correct in assuming that all Kitten Huffing articles are like this? |
Final Score: | 28 | Again, I think this needs to be rewritten. |
Reviewer: | -- wobbly Ape () (Riot Porn) 21:01, 9 September 2007 (UTC) |