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Let Someone Else Do It

I don't need an in-depth review, just some quick pointers on how to localize this better. Thanks. --Pleb SYNDROME _{CUN medicate (butt poop!!!!)} 00:51, 11 May 2009 (UTC)

Let Someone Else Do It is being reviewed by CajekHi! Your Source for Fine Scented Pee And Whatever Else Comes Out Of Him

Hey Syndrome! NOTE: I use 7 as an average score, not 5. I'll try to be short, but I'd rather get my score up on User:Cajek/Pee   Le Cejak • <18:34 May 30, 2009>

Humour:	6.3	Avg of sections Introduction (5/10): functional, but not a whole lot of haha 1.1 At home (5.8/10): taking out the trash, recycling... 4/10. Grocery shopping 7/10. Cleaning 8/10. I think I like the idea of you giving us useful sayings to just throw around. 1.2 At work (7.8/10): surgeon, 8/10. policeman, 7/10. airline pilot, 9/10. the airline pilot thing has a lot of potential. hostage negotiator, 7/10. 1.3 In everyday life (6.7/10): Roadside, 9/10. That was a good one. Restaurant 6/10. sounds more like just a guy who's a jackass as opposed to something that's over-the-top neglectful like the roadside one. Defending 5/10. same here, except I tend to agree: It would be irresponsible to break up a fight between gang members if you're just a citizen!
Concept:	7	I like the idea, but sometimes it sags. For example, the last section claims I should try and break up street fights? what? Focus more on stuff like the surgeon thing or the airline pilot or the roadside crash: stuff that the normal person has an obligation to help with. I'm not a cop, and not paying for dinner doesn't sound very interesting. I wrote something similar to this that somehow got featured, Why?:Give Up, that may be worth your time.
Prose and formatting:	8	There were some problems with random words being bolded for no reason, but other than that, it was fine- nice looking even.
Images:	5	Meh, I say. However, I don't know what kind of pictures would look good in this article...
Miscellaneous:	7.1	{{Pee}}
Final Score:	33.4	well, you wanted it "quick"
Reviewer:	Le Cejak • <18:34 May 30, 2009>