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Knife Guy[edit source]
Willy on Wheels, The Fuerdai Vandal. (Babbling ~ Recent ramblings) 12:17, 11 June 2023 (UTC)
| Humour: | 4 | The core issue with your humor is that the concept's origin comes at the end. While some articles get away with this by being well-known or written for a specific audience, this topic is so niche that it would benefit from the Reddit post coming at the beginning, as once understood, the article goes from pointless drivel to a somewhat coherent piece with jokes. Also, random does not equal funny, maybe put in some references to other things, and some external links. |
| Concept: | 5 | As stated previously, the concept is pretty niche, not many will understand, even if you moved the post placement, it would only help a little. |
| Prose and formatting: | 5 | Prose is poor and formatting is meh. Voice is uninteresting, being a bit more encyclopedic would help. |
| Images: | 7 | Images are okay, would benefit from a few more. |
| Miscellaneous: | 7 | Idk what to put here. |
| Final Score: | 28 | This is probably worth saving, but maybe not, it's really up to you and if you believe in the concept. |
| Reviewer: | Tunic (talk) 14:16, 6 November 2023 (UTC) | |
REVIEW IS NOWAO!! Willy on Wheels, The Fuerdai Vandal. (Babbling ~ Recent ramblings) 12:17, 11 June 2023 (UTC)