Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/Khaki

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Khaki[edit source]

this article feels lacklustre so uh ye

--wvandzm, the reviver of Template:Colours | talk to me please :D | 17:40, 28 April 2022 (UTC)
Humour: 3 Needs more work. Please read UN:HTBFANJS, that should help.
Concept: 5 What even is this? A page dedicated to an obscure colour? That doesn't exactly sound funny.
Prose and formatting: 4 I have NO IDEA what's going on at first glance. The writing could use a lot more work, but I'm not sure if I want to do it.
Images: 6 Looks very rough. I'm sure someone could make a better one.
Miscellaneous: 2 Firstly, placing all the text in yellow makes for a bad reading experience. Second... there isn't enough page.
Final Score: 20 I do not like this. I'd volunteer to help you, but I have ZERO KNOWLEDGE OF THIS THING.
Reviewer: ARandomPage, the named space (ARandomTalkPage) (Stuff they do) 12:24, 8 May 2022 (UTC)