Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/Khaki
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Khaki[edit source]
this article feels lacklustre so uh ye
- --wvandzm, the reviver of Template:Colours | talk to me please :D | 17:40, 28 April 2022 (UTC)
Humour: | 3 | Needs more work. Please read UN:HTBFANJS, that should help. |
Concept: | 5 | What even is this? A page dedicated to an obscure colour? That doesn't exactly sound funny. |
Prose and formatting: | 4 | I have NO IDEA what's going on at first glance. The writing could use a lot more work, but I'm not sure if I want to do it. |
Images: | 6 | Looks very rough. I'm sure someone could make a better one. |
Miscellaneous: | 2 | Firstly, placing all the text in yellow makes for a bad reading experience. Second... there isn't enough page. |
Final Score: | 20 | I do not like this. I'd volunteer to help you, but I have ZERO KNOWLEDGE OF THIS THING. |
Reviewer: | ARandomPage, the named space (ARandomTalkPage) (Stuff they do) 12:24, 8 May 2022 (UTC) |