Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/HowTo:Write Good (reworked)
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HowTo:Write Good [edit source]
After a very helpful review from a total boob, I have reworked it a little bit and am resubmitting, if anyone cares.
TPLN 00:22, 26 February 2009 (UTC)
- Ahhhaha...I get it...because Tit...funny ~SirTagstit • VFH • NotM • PEEING • CPT • RotM • BFF 01:09, 26 February 2009 (UTC)
- No, it isn't funny. I hate stuff that isn't funny. I'm going to eat a worm. --TPLN 01:12, 26 February 2009 (UTC)
| Humour: | 10 | Fan-fucking-tastic. I laughed out loud several times, which is problematic because it's 1:20AM and my roommate is asleep. The wonderfully bad advice, the "English jokes," the "it was a dark..." beginning, and the similies. Brilliant. Fucking brilliant. |
| Concept: | 10 | Fucking brilliant. |
| Prose and formatting: | 9 | You write "writed" instead of "written" at one point, though I'm fairly certain this is intentional. Bad joke alert: you write good! A-ha, a-ha, a-ha. *slaps knee* |
| Images: | 7 | Two good, appropriate images. Fittingly, this is a text-driven article, and doesn't need too many images. Perhaps try finding one more, to break up the rather texty middle just a bit. |
| Miscellaneous: | 10 | Love it. |
| Final Score: | 46 | This article is like candy dreams...in space. |
| Reviewer: | --Guildensternenstein 06:23, 26 February 2009 (UTC) | |