Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/HowTo:Mail a Letter
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HowTo:Mail a Letter[edit source]
Inspired by a line in IRC, here's a poorly-planned article, one where more time was spent on the images than the execution. It's a goddamned trainwreck; what do you think? --
Contestant CUN -- VFH NotM Buzz Ctrbs 06:49, 16 December 2007 (UTC)
| Humour: | 8 | Short, but it made me laugh and thats all that matters! I don't really think this would benifit from much expansion as it's funny enough already. The slow buildup of irritation into psychotic fury over such a simple task works very well. However, if you feel it does need more length, you could always add some sort of mishap with a postbox at the end. |
| Concept: | 7.5 | I good idea overall, though I think similar articles have been made before. I can't think of any examples right now, but I recognise the format. Having said that the idea of an irriatating minor task causing amssiev amounts of anger will always be funny, as will jokes about pointless crap from obscure relatives you never see, prehaps that could be the subject of another article? |
| Prose and formatting: | 8 | Well wrtiien, no problems that I can see, but then as you can probably tell from my writings I'm typo blind. So that score probably means nothing. |
| Images: | 9.0 | The images and caption complemeted the article very well. |
| Miscellaneous: | 8 | No one ever seems to have enough of this. Maybe add a small mention of it to each section. |
| Final Score: | 40.5 | Overall a good article, short but hysterical. The only thing I think might harm it on VFH is length bias. |
| Reviewer: | --Winstanley1 12:10, 17 December 2007 (UTC) | |