Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/HowTo:Get Over Jenny
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HowTo:Get Over Jenny[edit source]
I know it needs more pictures, I put out a request for ones already, so don't mention the lack of pics, just rate the ones already there. Other than that, noithin to say. Hope you like it. Smokin' Cheddar BBQ: The King of the Triangular Snackfoods 20:01, 11 March 2009 (UTC)
| Humour: | 6 | I liked the humor of the article at first, and was instantly sucked into the character perspective. As I read on, the dialogue became a little jarring to read, and it drew the story line out longer than necessary. |
| Concept: | 8 | I enjoyed the concept, and the point of view narrative. I think it's mainly the the content that needs refining. |
| Prose and formatting: | 6 | This goes with the previous comment... Certain areas could be shortened to make more impact with less of the marginal text. I like the 'internal thought' areas of the article more so than the script-style cursing and shouting in the dialogue quotations. (Use it sparingly) |
| Images: | 4 | Only 2 images, but you knew that... The couple image is ok, but the jail image is perfect. |
| Miscellaneous: | 6 | Could use a "See Aso" section, and needs categorization. |
| Final Score: | 30 | Overall not a bad article. I suggest a slight reformatting, add some more images, and remove unnecessary dialogue for pacing. |
| Reviewer: | ~Formerly Annoying Crap 04:46, 12 March 2009 (UTC) | |