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Wrote this over the last few days. In-depth review appreciated.--Striker2117 19:04, May 1, 2010 (UTC) Striker2117 19:04, May 1, 2010 (UTC)

I'll get this. 12 hours. I won't take as long as I did last time--DirectorWILLYOU 333Talk IF YOU DARE 21:55, May 1, 2010 (UTC)

Almost finished--DirectorWILLYOU 333Talk IF YOU DARE 02:18, May 3, 2010 (UTC)

If anyone else wants toreview this they can< i just don't think I have the time.--DirectorWILLYOU 333Talk IF YOU DARE 04:42, May 4, 2010 (UTC)

Alrighty, I'll give this another go.--DirectorWILLYOU 333Talk IF YOU DARE 02:09, May 5, 2010 (UTC)

Humour:	10	I thought it was pretty funny, and you use a lot of cool things. Good job
Concept:	10	When I read this article, I was like “wow”. You have a sound concept here, and you stuck with it the entire time. You used up valuable research and I can tell because I looked some of that up. Way to go!
Prose and formatting:	8	Couple of mistakes here, as you do tend to mix your there with theirs. Go over them with the spell-check on MS Word’s spell-check
Images:	10	The images were perfect. I don’t think this needs any criticism
Miscellaneous:	9	My overall grade of this article
Final Score:	47	Sorry it took me forever again. I not usually like that (anymore). Last week was a pain in the ass, so I apologize for that. Anyways, I know I'm suppose to be indepth, but I think it fine as it is, with the exception of the grammar errors. If you have any questions/comments, just go to my talk page and I’ll be happy to answer them. Good Luck! Cheers!
Reviewer:	--DirectorWILLYOU 333Talk IF YOU DARE 02:27, May 5, 2010 (UTC)