Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/Hans Blix and the Weapons Inspectors
Hans Blix and the Weapons Inspectors[edit source]
i know i already have an entry under review, but now that there's so many reviewers and so few reviewees, i figured, 'what the hell'? true story. anyway, i definitely need images for this one, so recommendations on that front would be great, as well as the usual stuff. -- 02:24, 12 December 2007 (UTC)
This was a particularly hard review to do. On one hand, I was reading it for my own pleasure, on the other, I was trying to think about what people tend to like here. I feel this article is probably a bit high-brow for some. Like I said above, the humor is a bit more subtle. Also, a basic knowledge of the circumstances of the whole 'weapon inspector' debacle would be needed. along with some basic knowledge of the players involved. Unfortunately, I don't think too many here would vote for VFH for these reasons. But hell...I could very well be wrong, and am under-estimating the other individuals here.
As for suggestions for improvement...It depends on what another reviewer thinks, honestly. But if a 'dumbing down' process is what they suggest would make for a better received piece, then unfortunately it would really be hard to do that. We are talking about HANS here. I think 'Pop Rocks' would be the most excitement he has encountered in the last decade.
I'm sorry if you feel i am shooting down your story, i thing it's good, myself. This type of humor is something i can appreciate. I can think of quite a few more 'cute' things to do with it, like adding more interactivity between real events that happened and the "band's" escapades/tour. IF another reviewer thinks it also is too 'subtle'...here is an idea for a switch: Make it look like a FAN's WEBSITE PAGE....with her (gotta be a girl) comments intersparsed ("OMG, the U.N. is like, being TOTALLY UNFAIR...and doesn't Kofi look uber-hot in that pic of them standing in front of the munitions dump?")...just an idea i'm throwing out there, maybe it could give you a jump-start to something or other.
I have created another table here, for purposes of garnering a 2nd review...I think perhaps you might need a second opinion.
Review now