Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/Gollum
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Gollum[edit source]
Pilkster 15:00, December 3, 2011 (UTC)
| Humour: | 7 | Overall I'd say it's okay. I feel that the 3rd paragraph in "movie deal and rise to fame" needs to be tweaked- I love LOTR so I know who Viggo Mortensen is but will other, not so devoted readers? (please be clear so the idiots that read the page know exactly what (or whom) you're talking about) |
| Concept: | 7.5 | The idea that Tolkien and Gollum were users and abusers of many things is an interesting concept (certainly explains Gollum's appearance) and perhaps could be expanded upon?-just don't overdo it to the point of it being stupid. Personally I'd like to see some more Lord of the Rings references and content woven into it. |
| Prose and formatting: | 10 | I really don't see any problems with the prose/formatting and I'm a Grammar Nazi. |
| Images: | 7 | I burst out laughing when I saw the first picture and its caption. Second is fairly appropriate as well. A couple more pictures with decent captions would really hit the spot though, preferably if they were edited (or not) LOTR pics with appropriate captions. |
| Miscellaneous: | 7.9 | I just averaged your score. The redlinks were a bit distracting as i was reading it. I might clean those up after I'm done here though. |
| Final Score: | 39.4 | All and all, I enjoyed reading this article and I look forward to any future updates made. |
| Reviewer: | -- 03:09, December 4, 2011 (UTC) | |
